Not bad, cool shots
You got an eye for cool camera shots. I enjoyed the first person view when he's getting punched (although wasnt too crazy about the constant eye lids being seen- I suggest using that aspect less). The backgrounds were cool. I enjoyed the "weapons" and the shadowmen's design - simple, yet scary. The only thing I had a huge problem with is the voice for the Grim Reaper-esque guy. I suggest not using such a "stock" voice, or atleast do it better (in otherwords, dont let us be able to say "okay, he just lowered the pitch of his voice in goldwave or whatever"). That voice really hurt the ending, imo. Other then that, I enjoyed it. I hope to find out where this will go in future installments.